Argument Structure
Try revising your points to give them some kind of organizational style. Consider 3 ARGUMENT structure – make a claim and then each main point serves as an argument for that claim. Or you can consider PROBLEM – CAUSE – SOLUTION structure where you address the problem in the first main point, what’s causing it in the second main point, and how to solve it in the third main point. For more information on Argument Structure read this: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Logical_form
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