Narrative Proposal

I dont have an exact thesis but i want the narrative proposal to consist of research in the BDSM community. I am copying below what I submitted as some options when my professor asked for ideas. Let me know if you have questions.  Negative Stigma has existed in the Bondage and Discipline, Dominance and Submission, Sadochism and Masochism (BDSM) community for years. The community is sacred and valuable to the members and it appears there is misinterpretation of what power and control means to members of the community. There is also a notion that all BDSM members have mental or psychological distress. In this study I would like to introduce the idea and point out that pain and pleasure can be utilized as an intervention to decrease mental health symptoms in the BDSM community, point out the negative stigmas, identify and clarify what power and control means. I aim to conduct experimental surveys with numerous members of the BDSM community. This study will bring awareness and knowledge to those uneducated about the BDSM community.