University Application Recommender Request

Hi professor xxxxx,Thank you very much for your reply. I have take your SOC SCI 3A at spring 2020, your Econ 15A at spring 2020 and Econ15B at summer section1 2020. You are the professor I have taken the most courses at university xxxx. Since the outbreak of COVID-19, we have moved the courses online. This makes us unable to communicate face to face, so you may not remember me. As a transfer student, I came to university xxxx  to take classes in September 2019. It took me just one year to complete all university xxxx’s business economics major course. It was a big challenge for me, but I almost made it. But this also prevented me from contacting more teachers. As I mentioned before, I took three major courses for you. For me, you are the teacher I have take the most class in university xxxx. Master’s degree is a very important thing for me, it will change my life. Please give me a chance, I will attach my complete information, already my personal statement. Alternatively, I am happy to draft a version for you to amend and approve. I look forward to hearing from you, and if you have any questions, I would be happy to discuss them in more detail. my mother language is not English, please help me check the grammer and vocabulary, and make professor happy to help me write Letter of recommendation  thank you so much!